Finished Opening Sequence for Retribution

Below is the finished opening sequence for our thriller - Retribution. Any feedback would be appreciated.



Overall I really like our opening sequence, however I think that it is unclear in the girls significance to the rest of the film. Only when you have read the blurb do you understand who she is and what her purpose is. Of course, if this was a real film, the sense of mystery surrounding the girl would be appealing to the audience and make them want to find out who she is, what the man's motives are and of course what actually happens to her. I think some of our shots could have been better framed, particularly the shot going from the glass on the table to the bedside table and some of the outside shots. But generally I'm proud of what we have achieved.